Model composition birthday primary 2 pdf
- Sabreena Nazimudeen
- Mar 2, 2024
- 1 min read
Model composition birthday primary 2 pdf
Student: Ian Ang, P2 (Improved version)
Pictures given: Birthday cake / Invitation card
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Below is a picture of DRAFT 2 of the student's composition. Our students go through multiple rewrites to improve their composition writing skills. We have presented the improved version of this draft in this blog. We have highlighted good phrases that were used in this composition.
Model composition - Primary 2 - Birthday Bash
Last week was Gogo’s birthday bash. Gogo turned eight years old. Gogo gave me an invitation to attend his birthday bash. I felt over the moon, and I grinned from ear to ear. The place of the party was decorated with yellow streamers and rainbow-coloured balloons. I bought Gogo a present.
Gogo was wearing a sequined shirt. He was very dashing. It was a circus-themed party with many magic trick shows. We had a whale of a time. There was confetti of every single colour flying down from above.
Gogo’s mother bought a cyan-coloured cake with white-coloured icing. It looked very tasty. It made my mouth water. We could not wait to cut the cake. We belted out a birthday song for Gogo.
Gogo thanked everyone profusely. We were on cloud nine, as the cake was scrumptious. We were in seventh heaven!
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