Here is a model composition suitable for Primary 3 - "Honesty." Below you will find an essay (DRAFT 2) written by one of our students. Our students go through multiple drafts. What you will find in this blogpost is the improved final draft of the composition. Model composition: Honesty (example)
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Model composition: Honesty
Student: Chin Pin Yuan, P3 (Improved version)
Picture used: Wallet
Model compositions primary 3 English: Honesty
Model compositions primary 3 English: Honesty
Topic: Honesty
Student: Chin Pin Yuan
Picture used: Wallet
         The azure blue sky had lots of marshmallow clouds. The sun was like a fireball in the sky. I was ambling home from school, day dreaming about the new iPhone 15 pro max. My parents would not buy it for me as it cost an arm and a leg. The trees were swaying in the cool breeze and the birds were chirping loudly. The flowers bobbed their heads at me. Little did I know something unexpected was going to happen.
         Halfway through my journey, something caught my eye. My eyes lit up when I saw a wallet. My jaw dropped. My eyes were as big as basketballs. It was black in colour, worn-out and it was a leather wallet. I checked the wallet and found $300 in it. I was shocked. This was the exact amount I needed to buy an iPhone 15 pro max. I decided to go to the iPhone store.
         The air conditioner blasted cool air. It felt refreshing on my skin. Upbeat music blasted from the speakers, putting the shoppers in a joyous mood. I went to the iPhone store. iPhones filled every aisle. Sitting right next was the iPhone 15 pro max. the queue was as long as a dragon. I opened the black wallet and found an identification card. It belonged to an old man. I felt sorry and decided to return the wallet to the old man. I decided to go to the address written on the identification card.
         I knocked on the door, I saw an old man. His eyes were pensive. I handed him the wallet. Immediately, he beamed in gratitude. He was dancing in joy. He thanked me for returning him his wallet. He needed that money for his own medicine. I related the story to my parents. They were as proud as peacocks. They rewarded me with the iPhone 15 pro max. Honesty is indeed the best policy.
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