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Model composition secondary school - descriptive essay

Model composition secondary school - descriptive essay - "Describe a place that you enjoy going to on a regular basis and the people you meet there." Below you will find an essay (DRAFT 2) written by one of our students. Our students go through multiple drafts. What you will find in this blogpost is the improved final draft of the composition. Model composition: Descriptive Essay (example)

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Model composition secondary school - descriptive essay

Describe a place that you enjoy going to on a regular basis and the people you meet there

Student: Harper Thongthai, Secondary 1 (Improved version)

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Nestled in the heart of my bustling city,there is a place that holds a special spot in my heart: the local coffee shop. It has become a sanctuary for me, where, amidst the chaos of everything, I simply enjoy the moment. The soft aroma of freshly brewed coffee greets me as I push open the door,and I am immediately enveloped in the warm, cosy atmosphere.

As I made my way to the counter to place my order,I was greeted by the friendly baristas, who never fail to brighten my day with their smiles and cheerful greetings. They know my usual order by heart: a piping hot latte with a sprinkle of cinnamon on top. It is prepared and waiting for me before I even reach the register.


Finding a comfortable spot by the window,I settled into a plush armchair and took a sip of my coffee, savouring the rich and creamy flavour that warms me from the inside out. The gentle hum of conversation fills the air as I observe the eclectic mix of patrons that frequent the coffee shop.


There are the regulars—the elderly couple who come in every morning for their daily dose of coffee and a chat; the young professionals typing away on their laptops; and the students huddled together studying for their exams. Each person adds a unique energy to the space, creating a vibrant tapestry of human connection.


I strike up a conversation with the person next to me. a fellow coffee enthusiast who shares my love for the Italian roast. We bond over our mutual appreciation for the art of coffee-making, swapping stories and recommendations for our favourite brews. In that moment, we are not just strangers sharing a table but kindred spirits united by our shared passion. The hours creep by unnoticed as I lose myself in the comforting ambience of the coffee shop. 


The soft background music, the gentle hum of conversation, and the clinking of cups and saucers also create a sense of tranquilly and peace that I rarely find anywhere else. It is a place where time seems to stand still, allowing me to pause, breathe, and simply be. As I reluctantly get my belongings to leave, I am filled with a sense of contentment and gratitude for a special place that has become a cherished part of my routine.


A good explanation on Descriptive Essays students may find useful

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